Final Narrative for our Film

Change in Narrative and Development of an Alternative Ending

An unexpected issue has arised. Our media teacher has informed us that we will not be allowed to use the feature of drugs within our storyline; this has resulted in a dilemma as we will now need to conjure up a completely different idea for part 2 (which will still suit our whole storyline). The reasons we will be unable to use drugs in our film is because of how the audience will see them as a cliché (drugs may be seen as overused in modern films). There is also the health and safety issues involved, despite using props, if we were to use a real syringe there would be a great risk in accidentally harming ourselves. 



As we are not allowed to use drugs as a storyline basis, as a group we have reviewed and discussed a limited amount of different ideas we could use to replace it. In result, we have thought up a new idea still involving the similar features of our original idea. Instead of our main character being the trafficker and dealer of the terrorist's drugs, instead he will be an escort of a product held within a brief case which he is suppose to deliver to someone. I have re-created the storyboard for part 2; below I will explain in detail our new narrative of our film.



New Part 2 of the Storyboard
Continuing on from part 1 of the storyboard, the scene has now cut into a flashback - the scene is now part 2. This scene starts with a pan across the seam of a briefcase, where it follows to show the flicking of the latches and the main character opening the briefcase. By using a briefcase we can create an enigma - throughout the whole film we will not reveal to the audience what is inside the briefcase. The main character is sat across a table with another mystery character (this will be the man he is allied and involved in stealing the product with), as he turns the opened briefcase to show the man, the camera movement will move and rotate so the contents is hidden (as shown in clip 5 of the storyboard). This scene carries on with a number of shot/reverse/shots as the two characters are deep in conversation about what is happening and what they are going to do.
     Suddenly there is several sharp bangs at the door - the terrorists have found them. The two characters are in shock and need to escape. The main character tells his accomplice to grab the briefcase as they both head for the backdoor; as they leave, the front door is broken down and the following scene cuts to a chase. As they run out the building, it leads to an open woods - this is where the two characters separate and the chase continues. At this point, there is a point-of-view shot from the main character looking back at the man chasing him, and as he turns to look ahead of him he is suddenly knocked out by another terrorist hiding behind a tree. The scene then cuts to black, this is the end of part 2, where part 3 is to follow.

Alternative Ending

Our group has also thought that by including an alternative ending or a 'twist' within our film it could be a creative and effective way to increase the quality and evolve the storyline of the film, while simultaneously intriguing the audience.
     The twist for our film may seem complex to understand, however, we intend to include the twist in attempt to confuse the audience about what happens in the film, leaving them with many unanswered questions which they will question themselves about. This twist happens at the very end of the film. Looking at part 4 when the hostage is 'saved' by a mystery character, who is not revealed (shown in shot 5 of part 4), followed by the bright light when the bag is taken off the hostages head, the audience think that this man has been saved and is now safe. On the other, this is where our twist will come in. As the bag is taken off the hostages head and he sees the bright light, the white screen will then fade to black. This is where the repeatedly used shot 13 from part 1 (shown below) will again occur. The film will cut back to this same scene from part one, however, now when the gun shot is fired it will be from the gun held to the hostages head.
     The audience will be left confused and wondering whether the previous scene of part 4 actually happened, or did the terrorist shoot the hostage? There will be no real answer and this will be left as an enigma.

(Part 4: Shot 5 and 6)

(Part 1: Shot 13)

(The End)

Friday 12th October - Progress Update

Thoughts on Setting

As a group we discussed where we should use as our settings for each part of our film. My first idea for the setting of Part 1, 3 and 4 was in my garage. This was mainly because I used the areas in my garage as a base for the shots in my storyboard of these three parts. I believed this setting would make an ideal place as there would be a rustic and crude atmosphere portrayed through the rough stone wall, which would be essential in giving a good quality look for our film.

Here was an idea of the shot we would have used for part 1 & 3 comparing them to the storyboard:

     Despite this setting being well suited and appropriate for our film, we needed to take into account the issues of time management and availability of our cast. This caused a big problem. When discussing as a group we concluded that there may not have been enough out of school time where we would all have been free and able to attend filming sessions. In addition, cast extras would also have this issue - for instance, each session of filming may have to be suspended due to just one person being unable to be present.
     To our fortune, nostalgia of my previous groups AS preliminary gave us an alternative setting we could explore. Back to the manor basement it was! This setting would also work very effectively. Alike my garage walls, the manor basement also had a rustic, crude atmosphere to it. The limit on light created many shadows which would allow our film to conform to the conventions of a crime thriller. As we needed four different settings, the manor offered several places we could film.
     Exploring the manor we found an appropriate room to use as the setting for the ransom video in Part 1 and Part 4. This room consisted of a lot of low key lighting and shadows, as well as derelict, worn walls. This room could effectively convey a decaying and isolated atmosphere which would be ideal for this scene in our film. We also found a suitable room within the manor basement for Part 3. This room gave off all the similar effects, with the essential feature of shadows and low key lighting. We searched many rooms to find a setting for Part 2. As we needed a high positioned window due to the narrative of our film it took a long time to find a room that was suitable - however after exploring we indeed finally found one. By moving much of the furniture we could create the scene for Part 2. The chase scene in Part 2 of the narrative is set in a woods. As there are quite a few woods located around the schools area so this factor did not come as problem. Behind the manor was the perfect place to film this scene; the wide area of field and placement of trees meant we could achieve all the running shots we wanted.

Here is the setting we will use for the ransom video of Part 1 & 4:

Here is the room we will use for the start of Part 2:

This is the woods we will use to film the chase scene:

This is the room for the torture scene of Part 3 (also located in the manor basement):

Rough Idea Storyboards

Here I have faced the challenge of creating the storyboards for our film. I have started sketching the storyboard; I have created sketches for each different shot and use of camerawork in each scene. Each page is listed for each specific scene - Part 1: Ransom Video, Part 2: Kidnapping Scene, Part 3: Torture Scene and Part 4: Ending. I have used arrows within each shot to portray the camera movement, while also using colour to show what the focus will be on. For each part I have numbered the shots in order and added short and basic captions explaining the shot.

Here are the results on the development of the storyboards:

I was unable to finish the storyboard for part 2 due to the unfortunate change in narrative.

Initial Ideas for the Narrative

As a group we have developed and discussed the main ideas involved within our film. From looking at our initial ideas on the prezi, we combined and shaped particular factors to create a continuous and chronological storyline. We could then link different sections of our story to develop an intriguing and diverse plot which will leave the audience thrilled and wanting to see more. After knowing our narrative we knotted the different sections in different orders to create a sense of focused confusion and enigma. Here are the four parts to our storyline:


Part 1 - Ransom Video (Present):
This first scene is set in the present and will picture a hostage tied to a chair with a sack over his head in a terrorist situation. Here the terrorists are holding the hostage for ransom and in result are making a ransom video. This scene follows on till the superior terrorist puts a gun to the hostages head and a shot is fired (it then cuts to part 2 or the film). In this scene no questions are answered, an enigma is created as the audience are left in the dark - not knowing who these people are, why they are there or what they want. The setting for this scene will be in a dark, isolated and derelict room/building - a great place to use for this scene would be the basement of the manor at school. The basement is a very dark and isolated place which would be an advantage in creating a eerie atmosphere through the use of shadows and general shabby, run-down effect.

Part 2 - Kidnapping (Past):
When the shot is fired at the end of part 1 there is a flashback - this kidnapping scene is set in the past and will be explaining and answering some of the audiences questions. This scene involves the main character (hostage in part 1) with another companion in a small, claustrophobic room taking class A drugs, such as heroin and cocaine. The audience now know how these characters are involved with the terrorists; these two characters are involved in drug trafficking and instead of selling the drugs and paying the terrorists the money, they have been using the drugs themselves for personal use. Their drug taking is interrupted when a sudden bang is heard (a door being knocked down), this then leads up to the characters running out of the building and a chase scene through a woods outside. When running through the woods one of the terrorists jumps out and suddenly knocks the main character out - this cuts to a black out and follows on to part 3.

Part 3 - Torture Scene (Past):
The torure scene carries on from part 2 and is still in the past. The hostage (main character) wakes up to find himself tied up to a chair in a tiny room with just one hanging bulb as a source of light. There is another man in the room - this is the torturer - he is stood next to a table smoking and observing his tools of torture. This scene prolongs showing the intimidation the torurer is creating and the fear of the main character. When the hostages face is slashed and blood splatters on the wall the clip quickly blacks out and cuts back to the last shot of part 1 (when the gun is pressed to the hostages head). This is the beginning of part 4. For this scene, again the basement in the manor can be used as the low key light is vital in this scene to create fear and uneasiness to the audience.

Part 4 - Ending (Present):
This is set in the present, in the same scene as part 1and in perspective is actually just continuing from part 1. The last shot from part 1 when the gun is pressed against the hostages head and a shot is fired is now repeated. Following with a short black out. However, this now continues with the hostage opening his eyes and realising he has not been shot. The terrorists are confused with who has fired a gun and the superior terrorist orders his guards to search and find who it is. A terrorist grabs the sack and wraps it over the hostages head. The rest of this scene will be shown through a point-of-view shot of the hostage looking through the sack; all he can see is blurry figures and sudden flashing lights - he can hear shouting and guns rapidly firing. All this soon comes to a halt and there is silence and no movement. A single blurry figure stands infront of him and a flash of white light overcomes the screen as the sack is taken off his head.


This is the ending to our film. We intend on leaving the audience stunned, yet intrigued to find out who this man was and what happens next.